There is a huge flaw with this new strategy... you are suggesting teroclaw hatchling, but in the nr.1 strat for the fight against Vilefang you said "Use your Teroclaw Hatchling and random pet until both are dead - often they finish the fight already." I was lucky cause my teroclaw hatchling survived that fight, but I was not prepared for this change. The previous strat worked fine, if you change it at least keep it in the alternatives, since I somehow had all pets needed before and now I don't (I realize fragment of suffering is mostly optional. It's still unnecessarily confusing). If you want to keep it like this then make it clear that people should bring 2! mpd's and teroclaws.
Love your work in general though :D
I'm gonna assume that since this wasn't your first run through you are talking about Challenge Mode (no healing) and not Normal Mode (healing allowed). These strats work perfectly fine for Normal Mode ;)